5 Pillar Review: Jinnu by MMeagan Meehan

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"Okay.  You see that?  You see that there?  That sentence at comes in at the 10:22 mark of a 42 minute podcast?  That's your opening sentence. Your main character, protag or antag, is in the midst of, or has just finished, doing something.  Not a damned word preceeding that sentence of what is, supposedly, a horror story, provided any unique tension.  Not grandpa's suicide, not long dead uncle's curio shoppe, not how pretty and perfect servile Sarah is, noneof that needed to appear before Chelsea breaks a taboo."
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